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Shrutaswini | Thinking Body's avatar

i loved the imagery you used here, especially, the shore being a forgotten myth. so strong. such a beautiful read 🤍

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Awww. Thank you! I’ve always loved that line, too. I appreciate your kind words sweet girl! 🩶

noah's avatar

excellent read, you describe bodily sensations well, the emotional imagery is outstanding in this piece. excellent, seriously.

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Thanks for taking the time to read it, Noah! I appreciate your feedback <333

krista lynn's avatar

such a beautiful piece!

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Thank you, Krista! 🩶

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marga ꕤ's avatar

Thank you for this beautiful comment, Vaughan. Hearing that it resonated with you means everything. Grateful you read it. 🤎